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Almost Gone
Copyright ©2009, Doug Hale ¤1

An old shack on it's last legs.

Photographer: Doug Hale ¤1
Folder: Man Made Objects
Uploaded: 2009-Mar-23 17:33 EDT
Current Rating: 0.00/0 (Weighted rating: 8.00)
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Camera: Olympus E-510
Lens: Olympus 14-54mm f2.8/3.5
Lens Adapter: None
ISO: 400
Aperture: f7.1
Shutter Speed: 1/250
Focal Length: 19mm
Flash: No
Tripod/Monopod: No
Critique Level: Dead Honest Critique

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I'm not an expert on this kind of image so take this for what it's worth - it seems a little flat to me. Its nice and sharp, but the overall tone is just too gray if you will - nothing jumps out at you. Also the tree trunk on the right is distracting - again, that's just me you understand - my opinion is usually the opposite of everybody else's. :>)

I still like it though - it's interesting.

Tom Francis ¤1 at 21:23 EDT on 2009-Mar-23 [Reply]

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Thanks for the advice, Tom. I agree with the image being a little "flat" so I added a some contrast. It's still not quite right, but better. Regards

Doug Hale ¤1 at 00:43 EDT on 2009-Mar-24 [Reply]

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Tree doesn't help frame this shot and the black shadows are too scattered. Wouldn't say the shot is flat cause you have zones. Just that the light doesn't come together. Vignetting would help take out the tree and confusion.

Bruce Wendler Win ¤ $1 at 00:48 EDT on 2009-Mar-24 [Reply]

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you have some good advice there doug from those that have a good eye for the processing results. An excellent capture worth really exploring. I hope you have a copy of the original that you could play with. well seen imho

have a good day

george shaw ¤1 at 14:03 EDT on 2009-Mar-24 [Reply]

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Thanks Bruce & George, for your comments. The worst thing is to post a photo & get no feedback- especially when you're trying to learn and get better. No one would comment if they didn't care, so I am appreciative.

Doug Hale ¤1 at 17:25 EDT on 2009-Mar-24 [Reply]