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Copyright ©2008, Robert Schoeller Win ♥ ¤ $
Studioshooting with Romana
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Robert Schoeller
Win ♥ ¤ $
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| Folder: |
Robert's Gallery |
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| Uploaded: |
2008-Jul-12 13:56 EDT |
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| Current Rating: |
9.40/5 (Weighted rating: 8.77)
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| Copying allowed: |
No
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| Camera: |
Olympus E-510 |
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| Lens: |
Olympus 14-54mm f2.8/3.5 |
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| Lens Adapter: |
None |
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| ISO: |
100 |
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| Aperture: |
f/16 |
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| Shutter Speed: |
1/125 |
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| Focal Length: |
17mm |
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| Flash: |
Yes |
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| Tripod/Monopod: |
No |
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| Critique Level: |
Dead Honest Critique |
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A very interesting and well conceive photo! I would only sugest a different angle, this one feels strange... can't explain, maybe its the shadows on the left. Best regards.
Joćo Medeiros Win ♥ ¤ ¤ at 17:23 EDT on 2008-Jul-12 [Reply]
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I love the idea of this one, and agree that the execution is really nice. I'm bothered a tiny bit by the same thing that Joao mentions--something to do with the apparent angle or the lighting, but it sort of adds to the unsettled feeling so maybe that's okay. One other little thing: the bottom part of the hair (nearest the lower edge of the photo) seems slightly grey and blurred for some reason--maybe I'm just seeing things? Anyway, I really, really like the concept and the overal look of this one; I could easily see this as the book jacket of a sci fi thriller!
Elisabeth Spector HoF Win ♥ ¤ $ at 18:02 EDT on 2008-Jul-12 [Reply]
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Nice concept. If I can add to Joao and Elisabeth, I think it feels weird because of the upside down angle, maybe doing a 180 around the clock may change that. Then again, this could be what you were going for. The writing on the body is very well done.
Geno Sajko HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1 at 19:29 EDT on 2008-Jul-12 [Reply]
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I agree with Elisabeth on the grey hair point which looks a little odd unless she really did have a multi-toned hairdo! I think the strangeness of the lighting comes from the PP vignette. The shadow cast on the model does not match the effect of the vignette which forces the eye to think of a top down spot light IMO. I would suggest reducing the vignette opacity a bit or dropping it altogether. That said I like the concept of this image and the execution is very good.
Nigel Armes HoF Win ♥ ¤1 at 19:36 EDT on 2008-Jul-12 [Reply]
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Does this image really need the heavy vignetting to enhance the tattooed nude and doll? I personally don't think it does, and without the heavy processing this image would be stronger I believe. Interesting idea for an image.
E. Edwin Ennor ~ (E³) HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1 at 22:59 EDT on 2008-Jul-12 [Reply]
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she must take care of the Blade Runner. Like the idea. Perhaps you could have tattooed the doll too?
Best wishes,
Horst Schmier HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1 at 06:49 EDT on 2008-Jul-13 [Reply]
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Thanks for all Your comments - I really appreciate this kind of constructive criticism!!!
You are right with the hairs. I did mess around with the mask a little bit. Time for a redo.
The image should cause some inconveniant and wierd feelings. The vignette should emphasise the model and calm down the restless backdrop. I will redo the effect as well.
Thanks again for the nice comments!
Robert Schoeller Win ♥ ¤ $1 at 07:03 EDT on 2008-Jul-13 [Reply]
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you keep on amazing me with your creativity, images after images ...a trait I admire and lack ...cheers ;-)
dee vee HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1 at 14:33 EDT on 2008-Jul-13 [Reply]
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A unique POV and overall image... very well captured.. colours and lighting are excellent.
Robert Melnyk HoF ♥ ¤ $1 at 16:39 EDT on 2008-Jul-15 [Reply]