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An indoor window 1
| Photographer: | Jamal Dadsi ♥ ¤ |
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| Folder: | Jamal Dadsi |
| Uploaded: | 2004-Sep-30 11:46 EDT |
| Current Rating: | 7.67/3 (Weighted rating: 7.85) View all ratings Delete my rating |
| Copying allowed: | No |
| Camera: | Olympus E-1 |
| Lens: | Olympus 14-54mm f2.8/3.5 |
| Lens Adapter: | None |
| ISO: | 100 |
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| Flash: | No |
| Tripod/Monopod: | No |
| Critique Level: | Dead Honest Critique |
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| MFT Time 10:31 May 23 2013 |
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Very Nice!
The lighting is wonderful Jamal! The composition is such that your eye goes right to the subject which is pleasing. Makes me want some apple cider.
John Stankewitz ♥ ¤ $ $ at 01:00 EDT on 2004-Oct-01 [Reply]
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Jamal, I agree, the colour and atmosphere are wonderful, but I am not so sure about the composition. I would have liked to see a little more of the top of the jug and a little less of the out of focus door frame, moving the cups/jug a little down and towards the centre a little more. All in all a very interesting subject and with potential.
Thanks for sharing
Yvonne
Yvonne Steinmann HoF ♥ ¤ $ at 02:40 EDT on 2004-Oct-01 [Reply]
I recognise that style
I can now pick out your work from the thumbnails!
I agree with Yvonne, the bottom part of the frame does not significantly contribute as much as the remainder of the pot would have done. So I'd have been happy with the frame if there had been more pot, I think!
My preference would have been to remove the highlight off the wrought iron work top centre, that's just a distraction.
Like your other images, imaginative.
Rex Waygood HoF ♥ ¤1 $ at 03:03 EDT on 2004-Oct-02 [Reply]