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Any problem? ;-)

Any problem? ;-)
Copyright ©2007, Bernhard Sedlmaier

Photographer: Bernhard Sedlmaier
Folder: Bernis Fotos
Uploaded: 2007-May-01 15:26 EDT
Current Rating: 0.00/0 (Weighted rating: 8.00)
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Camera: Olympus E-330
Lens: Olympus ED 50mm f2.0 Macro
Lens Adapter: None
ISO: 100
Aperture: 5,0
Shutter Speed: 1/160
Focal Length: 50
Flash: Yes
Tripod/Monopod: No
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Very good expression and pose of the model. Just not so sure about background composition, particulary that window. Wonder if it would look better if she was more on the right, not in front of the window. Anyway, I like it!

Misha Majic ¤ at 18:34 EDT on 2007-May-01 [Reply]


a very assertive pose albeit a bit stiff ...colors are great and i do like the window on the left ...i'd try to crop as square and eliminate the extra bit on the RHS ...cheers ;-))

dee vee HoF Win ¤ $1 at 19:04 EDT on 2007-May-01 [Reply]


beautiful portrait and a beautiful girl! I agree with DeeVee's back ground comments.

vaggelis fragiadakis HoF Win ¤ $1 $ at 12:29 EDT on 2007-May-02 [Reply]


Bernhard - this is quite a strong and intense picture. For me the best part is obviously the model, the light that you have used and the colors. I am less fond of the where the arm blends with the window (which might be a result of compression though). Cropping a bit might not be a bad idea. Klaus

Klaus Er HoF Win ¤1 at 15:14 EDT on 2007-May-02 [Reply]


Hi Klaus, the part where the arm blends with the window is due to compression. How would you crop this image? On the right side as dee vee said? In my opinion there is to less space to crop bevore I cut the knee. Thx

Bernhard Sedlmaier1 at 16:37 EDT on 2007-May-02 [Reply]