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Copyright ©2007, Bernhard Sedlmaier ♥
| Photographer: | Bernhard Sedlmaier ♥ |
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| Folder: | Bernis Fotos |
| Uploaded: | 2007-May-01 15:26 EDT |
| Current Rating: | 0.00/0 (Weighted rating: 7.99) View all ratings Delete my rating |
| Copying allowed: | No |
| Camera: | Olympus E-330 |
| Lens: | Olympus ED 50mm f2.0 Macro |
| Lens Adapter: | None |
| ISO: | 100 |
| Aperture: | 5,0 |
| Shutter Speed: | 1/160 |
| Focal Length: | 50 |
| Flash: | Yes |
| Tripod/Monopod: | No |
| Critique Level: | Dead Honest Critique |
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Very good expression and pose of the model. Just not so sure about background composition, particulary that window. Wonder if it would look better if she was more on the right, not in front of the window. Anyway, I like it!
Misha Majic ¤ at 18:34 EDT on 2007-May-01 [Reply]
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a very assertive pose albeit a bit stiff ...colors are great and i do like the window on the left ...i'd try to crop as square and eliminate the extra bit on the RHS ...cheers ;-))
dee vee HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1 at 19:04 EDT on 2007-May-01 [Reply]
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beautiful portrait and a beautiful girl! I agree with DeeVee's back ground comments.
vaggelis fragiadakis HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1 $ at 12:29 EDT on 2007-May-02 [Reply]
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Bernhard - this is quite a strong and intense picture. For me the best part is obviously the model, the light that you have used and the colors. I am less fond of the where the arm blends with the window (which might be a result of compression though). Cropping a bit might not be a bad idea. Klaus
Klaus Er HoF Win ♥ ¤1 at 15:14 EDT on 2007-May-02 [Reply]
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Hi Klaus, the part where the arm blends with the window is due to compression. How would you crop this image? On the right side as dee vee said? In my opinion there is to less space to crop bevore I cut the knee. Thx
Bernhard Sedlmaier ♥1 at 16:37 EDT on 2007-May-02 [Reply]