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Copyright ©2005, Terence C

Photographer: Terence C
Folder: Oly E300 images
Uploaded: 2005-Apr-18 08:39 EDT
Current Rating: 8.75/4 (Weighted rating: 8.38)
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Camera: Olympus E-300
Lens: Olympus 14-45mm f3.5/5.6
Lens Adapter: None
ISO: 100
Aperture: 5.6
Shutter Speed: 1/60
Focal Length: 20
Flash: No
Tripod/Monopod: No
Critique Level: Honest with Encouragement

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Good spotting! I wonder what part did you crop.

Carles Serra-Pagès ¤ $ at 09:27 EDT on 2005-Apr-18 [Reply]


Thank you Carles. A very keen eye indeed :)

It started off with a slightly "normal" FOV but there was too much distortion for my liking. The RHS together with a wee bit at the top and bottom was trashed. I am still not too sure that I like it. There is still too much tension for my liking. Maybe it's just an optical illusion - I viewed it with the grid turned on and it seemed ok.

Terence C at 09:39 EDT on 2005-Apr-18 [Reply]


Terence, maybe the >>> are what gives the tension. I think you got a simple and interesting composition

Carles Serra-Pagès ¤ $ at 10:27 EDT on 2005-Apr-18 [Reply]


A simple effective compositio, I like the lines and the color.

Frank Brault ¤ $ at 09:57 EDT on 2005-Apr-19 [Reply]